Essay Posts!

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First Post! I will post each essay with The players Name, (If applicable) who its for.

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Name: Zolifar (Dr_treeman)

Zolifar: A Tale of Life and the Wasting of It

As a young Seedling, life was hard for Zolifar Marktof TreeMan. Being a royal, friends were few and far between. The few that did want to associate with him did so only for their own gain. His father, King TreeMan, was far too busy with matters of state and politics to raise him. Zolifar’s mother had died in childbirth. The upbringing of Zolifar was not one of unconditional love; the rough hands of tired housemaids showed no compassion. Note that Zolifar’s upbringing was not the only cause of his lack of friendship; he was as spoiled and arrogant as a prince can be.

To cope, young Zolifar spent most of his time among the court magi and alchemists. While there was no parenting from the scholars, there was teaching. The educated men and women delighted in passing on their knowledge, and Zolifar was a more than eager student. Zolifar proved to have a scholar’s mind; he quickly understood complex incantations and formulae.

Upon reaching the age-mark of Sapling, Zolifar had gained a reputation as a prodigy. While most Seedlings’ task for passage to Sapling was to engage in mock-combat, Zolifar chose to demonstrate his mastery of the Imperial Druid’s magic. The judges’ reaction was at first one of surprise, then of awe. A mere Seedling had mastered magic that an Ent, even an Ent Lord, would need to spend years studying.

Years passed and faded, as did Zolifar’s interests. Zolifar had grown bored of the physical world; mastering all forms of magic in Sylvannia can tend to make other tasks boring. Zolifar was in the age-mark of Unknown; the age-mark that was in between a man and a child. An official name had not been given to this age-mark, but unofficially many called this span of time The Treenage Years. While Zolifar’s age-mark was still young, his skill-mark was at the level of Ancient. Few would achieve the skill-mark of Ancient in a century, and those that did were considered to be the strongest and wisest of magi in Sylvannia. Never before had a young Treenager come close to this skill-mark, but to even reach that rank while so young had never been dreamed of.

As you might imagine, achieving so much while so young leaves little for the latter years. Zolifar began his new life in The Net. The Net, called Leynet by some, was tapping into the web-like leylines that were the roots of Yggdrassil, The World Tree. If many people connected into those leylines, web-like, colossal, and vast in number as they were, a form of communication could be established.

Soon, Rootmancers appeared. Rootmancers could control these leylines and add modify the fibers within, or add accessories to the outsides of these leylines. One Rootmancer was known as Notch, for he had a notch on his bark for every time he had succeeded in life. Seeing as there was only one notch (it spanned his entire back though) , he was given the name Notch. Notch had invented a “game” (as they were being called) that was available through TreeC’s. TreeC’s being one of the Rootmancers’ greatest hits, they were devices that allowed for sight in the leyline/digital world. The full name was TreeComputer. Seeing as sight in leylines was fabricated, it could be altered in any number of ways. Users of games on TreeC’s were called Leyers, named after their leyline connections.

To the point, the Ent known as Notch had made a game he called Minecraft. The inspiration had come from games made by other Rootmancers, but many could see this as a more or less original concept. The game classified as Trindie, but became a massive hit. Zolifar was intrigued by this game, and discovered that there was a heavily downgraded but heavily moddable version of the game, called Classic Mode.

There was a rather extensive list of Lervers hosting multileyer Classic games. Lervers are leyline lobbies/multilayer rooms that involved one large leyline taking signals from other leylines, all across Sylvannia. Those signals were the transmitted digital Leyers going to the large Lerver.

Zolifar, a lover of puns, was attracted to one Lerver in the Lerver-Leyst in particular; a Lerver called ALL IN THE MINED. ALL IN THE MINED appeared to have an active and fun Leyerbase and Leymunity. Zolifar spent much time there, befriending the local Leyers and experimenting with building (one of the main points of Minecraft, a sandbox game). Zolifar was not fond of every Leyer though; some made sport of destroying others’ buildings. There was no fear of this beings deemed “griefers” though; Leyderators patrolled the multiple worlds of the Lerver and made quick work of the griefers. Zolifar admired these Leyderators, and decided that his goal would be to become one.

Time again passed, as it tends to do. Zolifar had achieved his goal of becoming a Leyderator on ALL IN THE MINED, and spent much time on the happy Lerver. Though, as with all things that long amounts of time are spent doing, Classic became boring. Zolifar no longer looked forward to Leyderatoring, it became a chore. Yet there was hope in the form Minecraft’s Treemium version. ALL IN THE MINED had saved up their Leypoints (money, in the Leynet), and gotten a Lerver for the Treemium version. Zolifar knew that he would regain his interest in Minecraft should he play Treemium; stories told of it being almost a different game.

One would think that acquiring Treemium would be easy for a prince like Zolifar, but it would not be so. Zolifar had never depended on his uncaring father for anything, and he wasn’t about to cave-in now for Leypoints. Nothing would have happened if he did anyways; old royalty like King TreeMan tended to be suspicious of the Leynet and hated to put any money into Leypoints (lest a Tracker tracked their LeyditCard). The problem was, Zolifar had no money but the his father’s. This was a most perplexing problem as Troyalty were not allowed to work for money, since their clamed to the Throne of Sylvannia should have sufficient money.

Zolifar was reduced to participating in free contests, relying on the his skills and the charity of Pokemon. Zolifar knew he would win someday, yet that time has still not come.

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Name: VoltageXXII


How did you find AITM?: Well I joined this one server that quite hectic there was tons of people and no "personal" aspect to it at all, so I left.
Then scrolling through other servers I happened across one with a rather witty name called "All in the mined" I thought to myself "Only 3 people online its a American server and its name is funny...I'll check it out." .
And so I joined, fell down to the underground area in main and thought "Well I think I'mma build a floating house here." and started pillaring, then Lighting_Po froze me and asked "And what are you doing?" I replied "Building a floating house." Light then said "Ok." and unfroze me.
From then on I started meeting other staff members, MasterOnion helped walk me through getting WoM, and by then I decided that this was going to be my favorite server.

What do you think of the players?: To be honest your all putrid little worms......JUST KIDDING y'all are some of the coolest people I've met in online gaming.

What do think about getting SMP?: I'd love to have it, mostly because there are people that only play it now (like Demonic) and I'd like to see them again.

Why do you think you should get it?: Honesty I don't know.....but some people have been harassing me to get it lately so I thought I'd give this a shot.

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Name: Fire_crafter100
For: ''friend'' (Name unknown)

Well your probably wondering hey why am I entering the essay giveaway? I already have the game well, I want to win this for a friend a really good friend I want to give him this gift code for his birthday cause thats all I can think of for a birthday present at the moment and he doesn't have a full minecraft account. I've known this friend since grade 2 we've been friends for a long long time. Your probably wondering why does he need full minecraft well me and my other friends usually play minecraft together and download cool texture packs and play all together on the server one of my friends made, we pvp together all the time, build, play with mobs, scare the heck outta each other with scary skins. Its so much fun! But since my bestist friend that i've known since grade 2 feels really left out and sometimes doesn't even wanna come over anymore and play with us cause he doesn't have the full game thats what we usually play when we all meet together He plays on classic servers alot he's no troller, griefer, spammer, hacker etc. He follows the rules on servers fine so if he ever comes on All in the Mined don't worry he will be very friendly and very funny So all I wish is to try and get that gift code for my bestist friend ever. So if you find it in your heats to like this essay or not well I'm just wishing that it gets picked cause he's like a bro to me.

Sincerely Fire_crafter100

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Name: xxmvp_playerxx

I want Minecraft because I feel that If i'm good, helper and other stuff on Classic, I can help on Full too, that's why I have my ONLY opportunity in this "Giveaway Essay". So, if I get the game I would be VERY HAPPY , That's why I'm doing this message.Well, This is all the explaining that i can do, I have more stuff to say but I don't know how to explain, That's why this is short.Thanks for seeing this message if you did, and think of it Please. How did you find aitm?:

Well, I found aitm when I was in Minecraft.net looking at servers,then I saw This name called "All In The Mined", And I was like "Wow, DIfferent name then others", then I enter.When I saw around the server I was like "This looks so cool" and that's why I keep playing here because is more cooler than other servers.

What do you think of the players?:

Everybody Is cool (except some crazy guys especially novices) and everybody are gently and cool with me.

How would you feel getting SMP?:

I WOULD FEEL AMAZING AND VERY VERY HAPPY ABOUT IT, because SMP is VERY different than Classic and more cooler, and If I get SMP, I would still connect to Classic sometimes.

Thanks for seeing my other message of giveaway and I would lovely know what's your opinion of my messages

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Name: Micke1990 (John said include all entries xD)

Hi freinds i like minecraft! i herd u give free minecraft wtf i was like.. so then i toght i shuld win so i make new post to win minecraft i started play minecraft classic long long time ago and i met many freind there. i was never able to play wit freind on minecraft since i not have it

i want minecraft so i can play minecraft i tink i should really win this. since i am a very nice person. LOL. yes i am very nice. if u know me as freind u tink im nice two. i am nice yes. so i play minecraft classic long time not minecraft but the one i have in internet searche program like internet explorer or firefox but i dont like firefox i like chrome yes chrome is better. when i have minecraft whenn i win i shall be farmer and farm and tings and i can give u all stuff free yes free! so i wrigt this winning,yes. u may tink i shall not win, no. i shall win.

it is a very hard thing to do to write a long esey abuot minecraft when i not have it, so you give me free i will make very god esey, yes.


ok,ok,ok i know you not know me but i am nise person,yes.

i add u on skype and we can be friends, yes.

HELLO FROM SWEDISH!

- mICKE

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Name: Bugboy24
For: Bandi

So, you all may be wondering who in fucking hell is Bandi. So.. Let's begin.

In the beginning, Bandi and I were on a forum. We began to play different games. We played League of Legends, Transformice, Wizard101, and for a short while, Minecraft. So.. he got bored of Minecraft because he couldn't do much, so, I invited him to our server in welcome to Minecraft.

He really wants to try SMP, because he's seen my videos of all the cool features. He thought about it for a short while, and since he has a D+ in Language Arts, he had me write this essay. LolololoL long story. His username is Spazzda, and I really wanna get Minecraft SMP for him, he also has a lot of imagination, so I think he'd be a great builder, thanks a ton guys!

~BugBoy24

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Name: TheheartlessDeviant

Minecraft is a big deal for me xD in only four days on classic I've gone from 62 hours to 108 hours xD, I wake up get on minecraft, eat, get back on minecraft, go to sleep, and repeat. I use to have the full version. But people told me to make a new account for Classic called HeartlessDeviant instead of Roxaskh0708. But now I can't get into my Roxas account. I went to the support for minecraft.net and nothing helped to recover my account. I'd like to get the full game for skins, sp, and playing SMP on Aitm. Aitm is the main reason I want to get the full game (not the only reason) so I can be a member of the smp server as well. I want to be involved as much as possible with this server because I want to help keep it fun, safe, clean, (and griefer free xD) I don't really deserve it since I've had it before, but I'm locked out of my account now x.x The only reason I am attempting on the free give away is so that I can become more of a standing member for Aitm. I was scramming through classic servers and they all weren't legitimate. And then I stumbled across this server and it's well organized. So I stuck with it, I'm glad I did. I love being part of it. So it's not a dire need for me to get the full game because I'll end up spending 50% of my time at least on classic still so I can help out. Today, August 2nd, is my birthday xD (hoping that raises my chances) xD I turned 16 today.
~How did you find aitm?:

Searched through the classic servers, trying to find a cool, decent one.

What do you think of the players?:

The higher ups are strict with the rules but make it really fun, I'm glad they're strict about the rules cause it keeps the server clean. The lower people like pupils and rookies are fun too because I like helping them out and giving them protips.

How would you feel getting SMP?:

I'd be shocked that I get it xD and extremely thrilled. First thing I'd do is change my skin and then play SMP on Aitm

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Name: THEGAMEr4345 (aka Lightning_po)

How did you find aitm, what do you think of the players, how would you feel of getting smp!!! etc etc etc

Hello everybody! My name is THEGAMEr4345. I found this wonderful server looking through the game's server list on minecraft.net when it was on the first page. Someone nice, I think lostie told me that I could win a full membership to Survival multiplayer minecraft. I love playing the game on classic, so I would love to play the full version of the game. My favorite part of this whole server is the wonderful players and the strong sense of community that I feel while playing the game. If I happened to get SMP, I would play the game ALL DAY LONG! I have played a cracked server for the full version of the game before, and I'm sure that with all these wonderful people I would enjoy playing the game for many months to come. Please consider me for the game's full version giveaway and thank you for your time.

BTW you just lost the game.

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Name: Zac1265

I have always wanted a membership for minecraft but i've never had the money to get one but since you are giving one away i hope you choose me for the membership because i could own arse on survival mode and help people win unlike classic which is becoming boring as all hell i would love it if you chose me because i would be on this until i die and i would love to try survival mode before i turn 20 years old which is next year
I found this server from the server on i was kicked so i decided to look for another server and stumbled over aitm by pot luck and everybody has been friendly since the first day i've been with you guys e.g. johsontea, lostie, sheppard, doom and everybody else and i can't do anything good in designs but if i get this membership i will practice my designs while dodging hits from enemies and ill even play with other people if they want to play with me

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Name: Frogger/Reggorf

Ehem..

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Kero kero ;D

-Frogger409-

Ke.Ro. Kero keroro kero kero, kero kerororo kero....

KUUU KU KU KUUU~~~~

[JohnsonTea 0]

Okay! there are multiple ways of picking the winner!

What I would like to do is that all judges give a score from 1-5 on an entry and to comment of what they submitted! Add all the scores from the judges and the 2 top contestants wins!

Another option is that we all use 2 entries that are the most deserving. Most 2 nominated wins! This could work since that aren't that many entries...

Any other methods that you guys prefer/suggest would be nice, we could always compromise!

[Ericrb 0]

I got 3 names, but I am not a judge... must... not... influence... argh.