iJess 0 Posted December 16, 2009 Pet society are running competition at the moment. I decided to have a go at it and this is the result ^.^ Any suggestion's on how I could have improved it? :/ Updated: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gaiamaiden 0 Posted December 16, 2009 i think its great hun!!! WONDERFUL! It gets the message across too, i hope you win xx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
iJess 0 Posted December 16, 2009 Just realised I've spelt loneliness wrong LOL Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
esperia 0 Posted December 16, 2009 well done hun and good luck Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lucky Strike 0 Posted December 16, 2009 well i don't think that a letter will be a problem! i love it!!! the only thing i would like best is another color for the pet... apart from that (which i don't mind! i'm just saying it would look even greater!!! ) i LOVE IT! i actually want to give it a home.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lea75 0 Posted December 16, 2009 I love the message here hun.....personally I would have the first line of writing a little higher though so there was not so much blank space....only my opinion though You should deffinately enter it though hun xx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
iJess 0 Posted December 17, 2009 I've updated it and given the message in a bolder blue Thank you for the nice comment's :3 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites