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So I got a magical flying comodo dragon...

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And I was riding on my magical flying comodo dragon. It had a pink tail
and eagle wings. My swrod was a lolipop so when I was hungry, I just
licked it. My magical flying comodo dragon landed on a purple cow that
was abducted by aliens and then bit it. The aliens got mad and shot me
with a lazor. It made a hole in my chest. I was looking through the hole
in my chest and was surprised my guts weren't spilling out, so I put my
hand through it. That freaked out the aliens and then they thought I
was a superior being, so they brought me back to their leader. My comodo
dragon was riding on my back the whole way there and I decided to also
bring the bitten purple cow with me as a pet for leveling up.

The leader alien looked at my hole and thought it was fascinating. After
cloning me to preserve the piece of historical importance, I punched my
clone. It was scary. The aliens put a computer in my chest so now I
feel like a cyborg. Afterwards, I was frozen in a little cell along with
my comodo dragon and my bitten purple cow. We stayed like that for
forty-thousand years.

When I re-emerged, the world was interesting. I found out that just
outside of my cell, which was on the dark side of the moon inside a
cave, was a small living area for me and my companions. I found expired
food so I gave it to my comodo dragon. The cow was content with eating
the leaves of the houseplants. And speaking of which, the houseplants
were very weird. They had eyeballs that looked at you when you moved and
even licked you if you touched them. I therefore named them
"Dogplants." I decided to look at the computer that was in my chest and
saw that the aliens left me a note saying I had been studied enough and I
could do as I wished.

So I came out of the cave and saw a big city in the distance. It was
very incredible, since last time I checked, there was no city on the
moon. I put some hovery shoes on my bitten purple cow so it could fly
and got on my magical flying comodo dragon. I flew towards the city to
check it out and on my way I saw many monster-like thingies on the
ground, outside the city. They were scary. There were spaceships and
hovercrafts all over and people were wearing interesting clothing. It
was a very busy factory-like city. I landed on an open space and many
people started staring at me and murmuring stuff. I couldn't understand
what they were saying. I somehow understood alienspeak but not this
language. Soon after I was surrounded by the local authorities. They had
big scary guns so I let them take me away. My comodo dragon was riding
on my back and I was riding on the bitten purple cow as I followed them.

On my way, I got a closer look at the people. Most of them had machinery
integrated on their body. They were like me sort of, except they didn't
have an alien computer in their chest. I was then brought to a weird
looking person. He was short, ugly, and had a raspy voice. He was also
mostly machine. He tried talking to me, but I didn't understand so he
put me in a room where many more weird looking guys started examining me
and my companions. They tried dismantling my computer to study it but
they couldn't figure it out so they left it alone.

After they were done, I was put in a nice looking room. It had very
interesting architecture which I had never seen. And the technology was
incredible. Since I had checked the year on my computer after I got out
of my cell, I knew it was forty thousand years in the future, but I
never knew it was this advanced. I was tired from all that was happening
so I decided to sleep on one of the couches. My magical flying comodo
dragon went up to the window that had a great look over the city and
slept. My bitten purple cow just stood there, since there were no
houseplants in this room. Afterwards I started inputting this journal
entry into my computer. The next chance I get, I will post another
update. I wonder what else I'll run into...

-Frogger of the 409th Keronji District

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Mike You are so wrong. It is obviously Yoshi.

approve You just got pwned By Notch.

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*Incomming transmission*

Frogger! Frogger this is your cosmologicon sythesizer agent LXIV! In an alternate dimension, you were not captured, and we've been partners in the intergalactic space league! Somehow, our dimensions met at a point in space time, and you vanished! That must have been what woke you up from your containment in this dimension! You're in grave danger! The people you've encountered are not native to the moon, they are living as prasites there! They come from the galaxy we explored that was surrounded by a time warp, remember! The whole place was frozen in the year 235812335136!!! That's why their technology was so advanced! We mistakingly left behind our geologic repressographer, and they must have discovered how to leave their time warp and find us! In their time, there are no more magic dragons, so they are searching to capture all the remaining creatures and bring them home! You should have your semicoldural restructionizer on you, right? You MUST use that to escape, because based on my calculations, it is the only one of your tools that will work within their interference shield! And that cow you found, I'm still not sure how it relates, but I know it's important! Ever since they arrived on the moon, multicolored farm animals have been found all over the galaxy! You need to escape with that cow, I'll be waiting just outside their shield, with radar protection so they can't detect me. Your restructionizer should have a sensormatiographice mode you can use to find me! We can analyze the cow in my ship! I must go, I have to moniter the klozmological scale to create a safe holding chamber for your dragon! See you soon!

Agent LXIV, Poptart

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Frogger... I uhh... called in the French Authorities to get you D: You are an immigrant to this world and they had to know. Sorry D:

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Right as I wake up, I get an emergency transmission onto my alien computer that's on my chest. It was from some Agent LXIV. I don't really know who he is, but it looks like he knows me. If his transmission is true, it seems like I was partners with him in another dimension. I can't remember that time, but I guess I'll go to him personally and ask him. Also, these weird looking guys are kind of freaking me out now that I know that they're parasites. I get up and tell my magical flying comodo dragon to get up because we're leaving and my bitten purple cow also gets up. I go to the door in the back, but it's locked. I start getting anxious. We are trapped. I also try breaking the large window overlooking the city, but it doesn't break nor crack at all. Not even my purple cow can do anything to it. It seems like the weird moon people heard me because soon after some guards with the scary looking guns burst in and point them at me. They gesture me to follow or be shot, which they demonstrated by shooting the wall as the bolt of energy passed right by my face. It stung, even though it didn't touch me.

I put my comodo dragon on my back and got on my bitten purple cow and followed the guards. We went outside and there was a whole circle of guards all pointing their weapons at me, with a hover craft open and waiting to take me away. I don't think my lolipop swrod could do much against all these guards so I decide to pull the tail of my bitten purple cow. That causes it to moo extremely loud, which causes the guards to clasp the sides of their head in pain. I'm assuming it's because of their enhanced hearing. I quickly got on my magical flying comodo dragon and put the hovery shoes on the bitten purple cow and flew away as fast as we could. There was a loud noise that sounded like an alarm ringing all through the city and many hovercrafts started chasing me and shooting bolts of energy at me. My magical flying comodo dragon is a very skilled at flying so he dodged the bolts, but during one of the dodges, another group of hover crafts outflanked us and attacked us head on and the only way to dodge both groups was to turn a sharp left, so we did and smashed straight into the wall of a dead end.

My comodo dragon was knocked out, and I was on the verge of blacking out too, when I saw a man standing in front of my purple cow, with what looked like a futuristic rocket launcher thing. He shot it and I felt a large surge of energy. I heard a loud explosion and felt the large shock wave, and I blacked out.

When I came to, we were in a dark, damp place that looked like the sewers. Tending to my companions was the man that held the rocket launcher. When he saw that I was awake, he said something to me in his weird language that I couldn't understand. It finally dawned on me that maybe my alien computer that's in my chest could help translate it. So I gesture the man to wait, and look through the setting in my computer. I look at the man more closely as I do it, and notice he doesn't have any mechanical parts. It seems like he's not one of the parasites, but more like me, a refugee. I continue to tinker with the computer and finally find the language section. It tells me to give a language sample, so I gesture as best as I can to get him to talk into my chest.

So he starts talking the funky language and soon, the language becomes understandable to me. And then I start talking to him. I tell him where I'm from, and what's been going on, and he just sits there surprised. He tells me he's willing to help me out, but I have to tell him where my safe living area near my cell where I was frozen is. I agree, since I'm going to be leaving this moon anyway, somehow. He gives me a rifle that he says stole from one of the guards and tells me it doesn't run out of ammunition like other weapons, but it has to recharge, and it overheats if shot constantly. I smile because I finally have a big scary gun to point at the guards.

As my companions wake up, I tell the man to sit on my purple cow and I sit on my comodo dragon. We start walking into the depths of the sewer and we can faintly hear all the commotion above. The man tells me it won't be too long until the guards start searching in the sewers so we have to hurry. As we talk, we exchange our names too. He says his name is Ai-woel Nin. He's been living on the run for several years now, ever since he refused to mechanize his body and also held a valuable secret of the government. He tells me that the people who did mechanize their body indeed managed to increased their capabilities, but they were also capable of being controlled by means of a computer chip implanted in their brains that allows them to use their mechanical parts. He found that out because he was a scientist that worked for the government. When he was told to improve a prototype of the chip, he saw the blueprints of it and saw what it was capable of. He didn't want to have anything to do with it so he ran away, while stealing some weapons to defend himself. He wanted to raise awareness, but didn't know how. I told him I'd help him think of something when we arrive at my living area.

After a while of walking, we finally emerge on the desert like area where I saw the weird monster-like things. I suddenly became nervous of being there, and I think Ai-woel noticed because he pointed at my rifle and says "That's what this is for." Seems like he wasn't planning on running into guards in the first place like I thought we would. My computer has a map of the surface that I've traveled, so I know where my living area is and point in that direction as we march on. We won't be flying on my companions since there's a chance that they have watch towers set up looking for us in the sky, along with radars.

Not too long after we emerged from the hole out of the sewers and started walking, we began to see the monster things in the distance. Having a purple cow and a comodo dragon with a pink tail on the surface of a white moon isn't very good to blend in so they soon notice us and start getting closer. I ready my rifle and prepare for a conflict. After they get closer, I begin to see what they look like a bit clearer. It was tall, hunched over, some brown and some black skinned, long curved front claws, a long dangerously spiked tail and stood on powerful-looking hind legs. If they get much closer to us, we'll be donefore.

A large pack of them starts running towards us full speed. They are very fast, and it looks like this won't be an easy battle. Ai-woel tells me to aim for the lighter skinned flesh on their chest, since that part is weak. I aim and fire, only to be knocked over by the recoil and miss it and hit another monster in the eye. The monster screams in pain and falls over. It's pack members ignore it and trample it dead. I never expected the recoil to be that strong, so I get on my knee and aim like that. During the course of what happened, Ai-woel already downed 3 other monsters. I fired again, and this time held my ground while hitting a monster on the upper part of the light-skinned flesh. Its chest exploded and it toppled over. We continued shooting them until they were getting really close.

Ai-woel told me to cover him quick, while he got some plasma swords and pistols for short-range. I killed 2 monsters while he did that, but the monsters quickly surrounded us. One of them lunged at me with its killer claws and I just managed to leap out of the way. My comodo dragon jumped up to one of the monsters and bit its throat out. The monster screamed and ran around smashing into other monsters and killing some with its razor sharp claws before it died. That gave us a bit of space and Ai-woel finally got out the pistols and swords. He tossed them to me and I started shooting and slashing frantically. By the time we finished killing off the pack, we were all wounded and in pain. There were dead monster bodies everywhere. It seems like they don't usually get to eat, since they went through all that trouble just to get us four. Ai-woel told me to wipe off any monster blood that I had on me, and to wipe it off my comodo dragon too. He also told me to tell my comodo dragon to barf up any blood it had eaten.

Ai-woel explained to me that the monsters' blood, when left out of the monster's body too long, turns into a very corrosive acid. I quickly wiped off the blood that I had on my skin and removed my clothes since they were stained with blood. Ai-woel had some extra clothing in his pack so he gave it to me, and changed into some himself. It had been a long day and we decided it was necessary to rest and tend to our wounds. We found a boulder with an over hand and used the bones and leathery skin of the monsters to make a shelter. Ai-woel also told me that the tail could be used as an excellent sword because of it's strength and ferociousness and that the blood could be contained in bags made out of the monster's skin. I got a tail, stripped it of its meat, cleansed the blood, and put it in a sling I had made out of the monster's skin, to hold the sword. We also made some pouches and filled them with blood so they could act as acid grenades or something. We went into our make-shift monster shelter, and Ai-woel went to sleep. I decided to input what happened today as another journal entry. I will add what happens next when I get the chance. I'm glad to have met Ai-woel and I hope to meet agent LXIV soon to figure out what is going on.

-Frogger of the 409th Keronji District

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Log 1256

I waited 7 hours for Frogger, but he never showed up. I wasn't worried. Even though there is a 73% chance frogger has no memory of his adventures in my dimension, his survival instinct should still remain intact. I suited up and ejected from the ship, bringing along mine and frogger's zealion shards, the crystals that gave us our powers. His shone blue and green, while mine glowed red and purple. I decided there was a 26% chance his memories from my dimension would transfer to him in this one once he was united with his shard. We had taken them as our spoils of battle when we stopped the rebels on the planet kyrznan. Mine allowed me to turn into any animal, and frogger's... I don't remember what frogger's does. Unfortunately, I've concluded that the longer frogger remains separated from his memories, the more they cease to exsist. I turned into a space eagle and glided swiftly past the parasite's defenses. I landed in a crater and turned human again, checking my radar. I sighed with relief. Frogger must have figured out how to activate his semicoldural restructionizer, whether he realized it or not, because he appeared on my radar, and his shields appeared to be rising. It worried me that there was another with him, but when I saw them fighting aliens together, I knew the stranger was a friend. I became a panther and sneaked towards his location, but I was soon spotted by the aliens. I wanted to turn into an elephant or something to attack, but unfortunately each new animal takes a lot of work to learn how to control. I would be too clumsy to fight, so I became a cheetah, which has similar controls to the panther, and ran as fast as I could. Soon I spotted the cave and analyzed a 92% chance frogger was inside, but I couldn't lead the aliens there. Making a large U-turn, I wrapped around one of their labor camps, and used my analyzer as fast as I could to pick up the labor unit's design. I hoped the shard would work this way, but I had never tried it. I willed myself to become like the parasites, and I pulled it off. My attackers kept running past and I managed to blend in. I had to hurry away, before they noticed I was a fake. Back in human form, I finally made it to Frogger's cave. He is resting now, with his new friend. I took off my space armor, and leaned back against the wall of the cave. Using the teleporting link I had brought, I rematerialized the specimens I had so far collected, along with my computer and other equipment we might need. Then the only thing I could do was wait for frogger to wake up, and hope his memory came back.

-Agent LXIV

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<_>
While I do appreciate your wanting to help with the story telling, I had envisioned it in an entirely different way. My plan was to do other adventures that ultimately led me to Agent LXIV, so that I could meet him and know who I was and where I was from. If he were to come to me, I'd have to come up with a completely different plot line >.<

Again, thanks for wanting to help, I may incorporate some of your ideas, but I can't go with the plot that you're trying to go through, since it is really hard to correlate our plot lines that we both have in mind.

To summarize, you can post ideas and whatnot, but to put in your own journal entry and expect me to try to follow I simply cannot do. This is my first story I am writing so I can't change my plot so drastically, plus I've had my own plan too. I'm sorry, but thanks anyway.


EDIT: I just wanted to add that your logs are quite interesting with all sorts of terminology I can only guess what it means. You should try doing your own story as well Wink

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lol I imagined there was a good chance you'd say that, but I wanted to keep going until you did Razz want me to delete my posts or just quit posting? xD

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Sad poor fwoggy.

Anyway, I think I'll continue writing this on a doc, and then once MC update hits with new writable books, I will write in that, and sell my novel on the server :DDD

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