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Dr_TreeMan

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  1. Planet Minecraft is pretty much a minecraft forum, does everything the other one does, but crappily.
  2. While we're talking about this, here are some mechanical errors I noticed: All In The Mined is a server that has been apart of the minecraft community for over a couple years, we have seen the rise and fall of a lot of great players, builders and moderators. The comma between "couple years, we have seen" should be a semi-colon ( ; ). Next: AITM is a server dedicated to fun and great building. It's a place where people can kick back and have some fun while they build amazing things. These two sentences, together, feel off. Perhaps you could rephrase the first sentence to: AITM is dedicated to having fun and building. The second sentence in that feels like a repeat of the first, it isn't needed. Next: We have a 24/7 moderated server with over 20+ active moderators so you, the player may enjoy your time at our server with grief free worries In the "so you, the player may enjoy" line, add a comma after player (making it become "so you, the player, may enjoy") "Grief free worries" sounds odd too, I suggest changing it to "We have a 24/7 moderated server with over 20+ active moderators so you, the player, may enjoy your time at our server while not worrying about griefers. Lastly: . There are over 100 worlds in AITM, all with rank specific access. Which allows you the player (ranked) access to worlds to build where novices and griefers cannot touch them. There shouldn't be a period in between "access. Which". If you're using which, then it make the second sentence incomplete. However, if you change it to "access, which", then you have a run-on sentence. I suggest changing it to "access. This allows you, the player, to build on rank-based worlds that novices and griefers can't". EDIT: This is only for the first two paragraphs in the "About" section. I saw some other problems, but I don't feel like typing them out. EXAMPLE: It's the map all players see the moment they come into our server, and the one hounderouds of guests build in everyday. For these reasons we need to keep it clean You spelled "hundreds" wrong (at least where I'm from, I'm not sure if Canada or other countries spell it differently). Also, I suggest adding the word "that" in between "one hundreds" to make it "one that hundreds". When I read it, I was confused at first.
  3. Second hidden message, aside from the movie description: on the bottom of Hollow's screen, in his taskbar (whatever it's called), you have a notepad file/ word document titled "Must Kill Doom".
  4. 35k Lowest *processing* *error found* *sending error report* *message sent! *escalating ticket* *ticket reaches core* ... I'll give you 5k total for it, 3k for diamond used to make it and 2k for the enchant that took you 10 minutes to get.
  5. The hidden message is in Awolninja's text, the first two words specifically. It's a description of the movie.
  6. Where are you going, Lachie?
  7. Since when does anyone other than expert+ get their own world?
  8. Dr_TreeMan

    me whining

    I'm talking about giant tasks of mass deletion or something, things that just get in the way of being creative Creativity would be incorporating the obstructions into your builds. Having to take out the natural landscape to build isn't creative, flatness is unoriginal.
  9. Dr_TreeMan

    scary vids.

    I think I found a scarier one.
  10. Dr_TreeMan

    Skin Requests

    girls in Zhuges Faction ಠ_ಠ
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