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Dr_TreeMan

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  1. i was hacked by one of these: deoman, piguy, fantasticblack


    Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

    Oh sorry, the wrongness is just so fu- hahahaha....hah....

    On a serious note though:
    Don't make accusations until you have proof
    (and don't make your password your username).

  2. I'm just going to say that a dirt trim is very easy to mess up with a wheat machine. What happens is you accidentally hit the trim block the redstone sits on, releasing the water and ruining what you've already planted. Lapis is going to be $800-$1500 extra depending on model as a price adjust.


    Dirt doesn't work, so the obvious solution is a lapis block.
    I'll buy it when I'm done buying my gold plated audio cables for my tv (because gold is totally relevant to sound).

  3. While we're talking about this, here are some mechanical errors I noticed:
    All In The Mined is a server that has been apart of the minecraft community for over a couple years, we have seen the rise and fall of a lot of great players, builders and moderators.


    The comma between "couple years, we have seen" should be a semi-colon ( ; ).

    Next:
    AITM is a server dedicated to fun and great building. It's a place where people can kick back and have some fun while they build amazing things.

    These two sentences, together, feel off. Perhaps you could rephrase the first sentence to: AITM is dedicated to having fun and building.
    The second sentence in that feels like a repeat of the first, it isn't needed.

    Next:
    We have a 24/7 moderated server with over 20+ active moderators so you, the player may enjoy your time at our server with grief free worries

    In the "so you, the player may enjoy" line, add a comma after player (making it become "so you, the player, may enjoy")
    "Grief free worries" sounds odd too, I suggest changing it to "We have a 24/7 moderated server with over 20+ active moderators so you, the player, may enjoy your time at our server while not worrying about griefers.

    Lastly:
    . There are over 100 worlds in AITM, all with rank specific access. Which allows you the player (ranked) access to worlds to build where novices and griefers cannot touch them.

    There shouldn't be a period in between "access. Which". If you're using which, then it make the second sentence incomplete. However, if you change it to "access, which", then you have a run-on sentence. I suggest changing it to "access. This allows you, the player, to build on rank-based worlds that novices and griefers can't".

    EDIT: This is only for the first two paragraphs in the "About" section. I saw some other problems, but I don't feel like typing them out.

    EXAMPLE:
    It's the map all players see the moment they come into our server, and the one hounderouds of guests build in everyday. For these reasons we need to keep it clean

    You spelled "hundreds" wrong (at least where I'm from, I'm not sure if Canada or other countries spell it differently).
    Also, I suggest adding the word "that" in between "one hundreds" to make it "one that hundreds". When I read it, I was confused at first.

  4. I'm talking about giant tasks of mass deletion or something, things that just get in the way of being creative

    Creativity would be incorporating the obstructions into your builds. Having to take out the natural landscape to build isn't creative, flatness is unoriginal.
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